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 {{L|Vendor|Hey! What've you got against the melons?!}}
 {{L|Mrs. Puff|Look out!}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|''[has a watermelon on his face]'' This must be the night driving part of the test. ''[scene cuts to two police officers using their nightsticks on a parking meter]''}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|''[has a watermelon on his face]'' This must be the night driving part of the test. ''[scene cuts to two police officers using their nightsticks on something offscreen]''}}
 {{L|Officer Nancy|We're gonna straighten you out!}}
-{{L|Officer Malley|This'll fix ya! ''[They keep grunting as they hit the meter until it's straight]'' Now let's get that one. ''[points his nightstick at another crooked parking meter. SpongeBob & Mrs. Puff drive by through a building]''}}
+{{L|Officer Malley|This'll fix ya! ''[They grunt as they hit a parking meter until it's straight]'' Now let's get that one. ''[points his nightstick at another crooked parking meter. SpongeBob & Mrs. Puff drive by through a building, knocking it over]''}}
-{{L|Officer Nancy|Barnacles, did you see that?}}
+{{L|Officer Nancy|Barnacles, did you see that?!}}
-{{L|Officer Malley|Yeah! That guy had no front license plate! Let's get him. ''[SpongeBob looks back at the numerous police cars chasing behind him]''}}
+{{L|Officer Malley|Yeah! That guy had no front license plate! Let's get him! ''[SpongeBob looks back at the numerous police cars chasing behind him]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Hey, look at all those police! I wonder if the president's in town.}}
 {{L|Mrs. Puff|Look out! ''[The mayor is cutting a ribbon at the end of a bridge that is not finished]''}}
 {{L|Mayor|It is with great pride that I officially open this unfinished bridge! ''[SpongeBob drives through the ribbon before he cuts it. The crowd of people that are gathering around the mayor take pictures. SpongeBob and Mrs. Puff do not make it on the other side of the bridge so they fall to the bottom]''}}
-{{L|Mrs. Puff|Where did I go wrong? ''[flashback to Mrs. Puff's first day of boating school]'' With the opening of my new boating school, I pledge that as long as a student is willing to learn, I shall never give up. ''[SpongeBob walks up to her]''}}
+{{L|Mrs. Puff|Where did I go wrong?! ''[flashback to Mrs. Puff's first day of boating school]'' With the opening of my new boating school, I pledge that as long as a student is willing to learn, I shall never give up. ''[SpongeBob walks up to her]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Hi, I'm SpongeBob SquarePants. ''[scene cuts back to Mrs. Puff, who is still screaming. Scene then shows a retirement home where a fish in a white coat is yelling at a truck]''}}
-{{L|Fish|Hurry up with the truckload of fruit punch! The seniors are getting cranky! ''[fish looks up and notices SpongeBob and Mrs. Puff crashing into the truck]''}}
+{{L|Fish|Hurry up with that truckload of fruit punch! The seniors are getting cranky! ''[fish looks up and notices SpongeBob and Mrs. Puff crashing into the truck]''}}
 {{L|Mrs. Puff|Alive! I'm alive! Oh, thank Neptune, I'm still... ''[a squad car smashes down on the boat mobile. The other squad cars fall on and around the truck. The truck falls over on its side as all the fruit punch comes pouring out]''}}
-{{L|Feminine Tom|''[inside the retirement home]'' Alright, seniors, let's open these windows so the world can see your nice white clothes. ''[when the window is opened, the fruit punch pours in. Scene cuts to Fred, who is mopping the hallway and listening to "Surfin' U.S.A." by the Beach Boys on his headphones. The fruit punch pours in then drains where Fred is still mopping. Scene cut to an elderly fish guy, who is writing on some paper]''}}
+{{L|Feminine Tom|''[inside the retirement home]'' Alright, seniors, let's open these windows so the world can see your nice white clothes. ''[when the window is opened, the fruit punch pours in. Scene cuts to Fred, who is mopping the hallway and listening to "Surfin' U.S.A." by the Beach Boys on his headphones. The fruit punch fills the hallway, drains, and Fred is still mopping the same spot. Scene cut to an elderly fish man, who is writing on some paper]''}}
-{{L|Elderly Fish|Oh, it's finally finished! A memoir of my life written in red ink. ''[red punch comes flowing in, making his memoir papers appear red]'' Aww, barnacles. ''[scene cuts back to outside where all the mess is]''}}
+{{L|Elderly Fish|Oh, it's finally finished! A memoir of my life, written in red ink. ''[red punch comes flowing in, making his memoir papers soggy and red]'' Aww, barnacles. ''[scene cuts back to outside where all the mess is]''}}
 {{L|Mrs. Puff|Ow. SpongeBob, are you okay?}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|That depends, did I pass?!}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|That depends, did I pass?}}
 {{L|Officer Nancy|Freeze, you're under arrest!}}
 {{L|Mrs. Puff|Hold it, you can't arrest him! He's just a student driver!}}
 {{L|Officer Nancy|We're not talking about him. ''[scene cuts to Mrs. Puff wearing a prison uniform, being locked up in jail]''}}
-{{L|Mrs. Puff|But I don't belong here! It's all a big mistake! ''[this triggers some other woman prisoners to complain about their not belonging here too. Puff walks over and sits down on the bed]'' Ok, you can do this, Puff. You can get through this without losing your sanity. Oh, that's a road we don't want to go down again. Positives. Think of the positives. Let's see...I've got no more papers to grade. Yeah! ''[laughs then jumps to the floor]'' In fact, no more work. No more boating school classes. No more driving, no more SpongeBob (Miss.Puff's brain clicks)...no more phone solicitors, no more SpongeBob, no more company perplex, no more SpongeBob... ''[gets into bed]'' ...no more road rage, no more SpongeBob, no more insurance payments, no more SpongeBob, no more SpongeBob, no more SpongeBob, no more SpongeBob! ''[sighs]'' I think I'm gonna like this place. ''[scene cuts to her boating school]''}}
+{{L|Mrs. Puff|But I don't belong here! It's all a big mistake! ''[this triggers some other woman prisoners to complain about their not belonging here too. Puff walks over and sits down on the bed]'' Ok, you can do this, Puff. You can get through this without losing your sanity. Oh, that's a road we don't want to go down again. Positives. Think of the positives. Let's see...I've got no more papers to grade. Yeah! ''[laughs then jumps to the floor]'' In fact, no more work. No more boating school classes. No more driving, no more SpongeBob (Miss.Puff's brain clicks)...no more phone solicitors, no more SpongeBob, no more company perplex, no more SpongeBob... ''[gets into bed]'' ...no more road rage, no more SpongeBob, no more insurance payments, no more SpongeBob, no more SpongeBob, no more SpongeBob, no more SpongeBob! ''[sighs]'' I think I'm gonna like this place. ''[scene cuts to her boating school, which is deserted and dusty, with Spongebob the only one in the room]''}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Class just isn't the same without Mrs. Puff. Just the thought of her alone and afraid in jail makes me think about her being alone and afraid in jail. I don't know how she's going to survive. ''[scene cuts to Mrs Puff doing a bunch of chores.]''}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Class just isn't the same without Mrs. Puff. Just the thought of her alone and afraid in jail makes me think about her being alone and afraid in jail. I don't know how she's going to survive. ''[scene cuts to Mrs. Puff breaking rocks, making license plates, and lifting weights, with a happy expression]''}}
 {{L|Mrs. Puff|Smelling the pretty roses.... life is just two kinds of ice creeeeam! ''[cuts back to SpongeBob]''}} {{L|SpongeBob|Oh, that poor woman. And it's all my fault. Maybe if I go talk to Patrick, he can ease my guilt. ''[scene cuts to the outside of Patrick's rock]''}}
 {{L|Patrick|Well, it sounds like it's all your fault.}}