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 {{L|Pilar|Oh yeah, two.}}
 {{L|Nat|We couldn't find parking over at the Krusty Krab. ''[cuts to the Krusty Krab, jam-packed with cars. The two customers walk away]''}}
-{{L|Plankton|''[burst out water from his head then drinks it, then sighs clamly]'' Now what was I saying? Oh right ''[angrily rips up the menu and stamps on it]''. I'm tired of the Krusty Krab taking all of my buisness! We're doomed, Karen! Doomed, I tell you! ''[cries]''}}
+{{L|Plankton|''[burst out water from his head then drinks it, then sighs calmly]'' Now what was I saying? Oh right ''[angrily rips up the menu and stamps on it]''. I'm tired of the Krusty Krab taking all of my buisness! We're doomed, Karen! Doomed, I tell you! ''[cries]''}}
 {{L|Karen|Well, why don't you do what all good business owners do?}}
 {{L|Plankton|''[still crying]'' What would that be?}}
 {{L|Karen|Advertise your product, of course. ''[she gives Plankton part of the towel]''}}
 {{L|Plankton|Advertising? ''[stops crying]'' I can't believe it took me so long to come up with this ''[Karen sighs]''}}
-{{L|Plankton|''[digging in a box of letters]'' Now let's see, Q no... P no...Ah, here it is, L! There, it's perfect! CHUM IS METABOLIC FUEL!. You really did it this time ol' Planky. Oh yeah, who's a genius.♪Have you seen this, seen this, seen my genius, genius, genius, genius.♪ ''[Patrick begins reading the slogan. While this is happening, Plankton stops dancing and looks down at him]''}}
+{{L|Plankton|''[digging in a box of letters]'' Now let's see, Q no... P no...Ah, here it is, L! There, it's perfect! CHUM IS METABOLIC FUEL!. You really did it this time ol' Planky. Oh yeah, who's a genius. ♪Have you seen this, seen this, seen my genius, genius, genius, genius.♪ ''[Patrick begins reading the slogan. While this is happening, Plankton stops dancing and looks down at him]''}}
 {{L|Patrick|CHUM IS...''[sips cup]'' ME...}}
 {{L|Plankton|Hello sir, and welcome to the Chum Bucket! Er, sir?}}
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 {{L|Patrick|Wait, what are we doing again? ''[Plankton gets angry. While he does, Patrick switches the letters around on the sign]'' There we go! Chum is Fun!}}
 {{L|Plankton|What the? This says "Chum is Fum." You've changed my sign to "Chum is Fum?" That's the dumbest thing I've ever heard.}}
-{{L|Patrick|They seem to think it's interesting. ''[shows a bunch of customers coming into the the Chum Bucket. Chattering amongest the Customers]''}}
+{{L|Patrick|They seem to think it's interesting. ''[shows a bunch of customers coming into the the Chum Bucket. Chattering amongst the customers]''}}
-{{L|Plankton|Apperantly, dum sells chum. And I believe I've just found our Advertising Director. ''[Patrick chews off a bit of a letter "R".. Bubble transition to the Krusty Krab]''}}
+{{L|Plankton|Apparently, dumb sells chum. And I believe I've just found our Advertising Director. ''[Patrick chews off a bit of a letter "R". Bubble transition to the Krusty Krab]''}}
-{{L|Mr. Krabs|''[screams]'' Only two customers? Customers are looking kinda scarce. ''[Chuckles nerveously]''. Must be low tide or something eh Squidward?}}
+{{L|Mr. Krabs|''[screams]'' Only two customers? Customers are looking kinda scarce. ''[Chuckles nervously]''. Must be low tide or something, eh Squidward?}}
 {{L|Squidward|They've all gone to the Chum Bucket.}}
-{{L|Mr. Krabs|The Chum Bucket? ''[He Looks through a pair of Binoculars and reads the sign above the Chum Bucket Door]'' "Chum.... is.... Fum?" SpongeBob!}}
+{{L|Mr. Krabs|The Chum Bucket? ''[He looks through a pair of binoculars and reads the sign above the Chum Bucket door]'' "Chum...is...Fum?" SpongeBob!}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Yess Sir?}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Yes Sir?}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|SpongeBob, we have a situation.}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|I'm on it. ''[He runs off]''.}}
-{{L|''[SpongeBob pulls a leaver which activates a "Situation Alert" button. Mr. Krabs is pulled away to his office via a moving plank. Another Plank tilts and SpongeBob slides down it. He uses his hat as a parachute and land in the middle of a target with two closed vent to his left and right.. The Target turns SpongeBob to the vent on the right and both vents open. A large metal Square shaped Hand Pushes him down the vent]''}}
+{{L|''[SpongeBob pulls a lever which activates a "Situation Alert" button. Mr. Krabs is pulled away to his office via a moving plank. Another plank tilts and SpongeBob slides down it. He uses his hat as a parachute and lands in the middle of a target with two closed vents to his left and right. The target turns SpongeBob to the vent on the right and both vents open. A large metal square shaped hand pushes him down the vent]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|''[Taking a switch out of his pocket]'' Five. ''[ A door with the Number 5 on it opens]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Four. ''[A door with the number 4 on it opens up]''}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|One. ''[A door with the Number 1 on it opens up]''}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|SpongeBob, I'm afraid our worst fears have been realized.}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Ah! Goofy Gober is going non-dairy?}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Ah! Goofy Goober is going non-dairy?}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|No. ''[Pulling down a screen]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Ooh. Slide Show.}}
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 {{L|Plankton|Excuse me, would you like a free sample?}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|No, uh ''[clears throat. masks voice as lady's voice]'' I'm full thanks!}}
-{{L|Plankton|No? How 'bout your little Friend? Hi SpongeBob!}}
+{{L|Plankton|No? How 'bout your little friend? Hi SpongeBob!}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Hi! I don't want a free sampl-}}
 {{L|Plankton|''[Stuffs the Chum in SpongeBob's mouth]'' Sure you do. LOOK OUT! SHE'S GONNA BLOW!!!}}
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 {{L|Mr. Krabs|''[Takes SpongeBob by the tongue]'' Come on SpongeBob...}}
 {{L|''[SpongeBob and Mr. Krabs leave scene]''}}
-{{L|Plankton|I'm gonna to see how our advertising guru is doing. ''[Goes into "top secret room"]'' What brillant slogans have you come up with this week Patrick? ''[Walks in front of Patrick only to find him asleep]''}}
+{{L|Plankton|I'm gonna see how our advertising guru is doing. ''[Goes into "top secret room"]'' What brilliant slogans have you come up with this week Patrick? ''[Walks in front of Patrick only to find him asleep]''}}
 {{L|Patrick|''[snore. sleepily]'' Hm, huh?}}
 {{L|Plankton|''[facepalms]'' Gah! You're supposed to be coming up with witty catchphrases to keep that rabble out there happy! ''[jumps up onto easel]'' Chum is Fum...We kinda got that one already. ''[Flips poster paper up to reveal CHUM IS FUM]''}}
 {{L|Patrick|OOH I like that one!}}
-{{L|''[Plankton Flips poster paper up again to reveal CHUM IS FUM again. Plankton flips poster paper up again to reveal multiple CHUM IS FUM on whole sheet. Plankton flips poster paper up again to reveal CHUM IS FUM together in the shape of Patrick. Flips paper up to reveal CHUM. Flips paper up to reveal IS. Flips paper up to reveal FUM]''}}
+{{L|''[Plankton flips poster paper up again to reveal CHUM IS FUM again. Plankton flips poster paper up again to reveal multiple CHUM IS FUM on whole sheet. Plankton flips poster paper up again to reveal CHUM IS FUM together in the shape of Patrick. Flips paper up to reveal CHUM. Flips paper up to reveal IS. Flips paper up to reveal FUM]''}}
-{{L|Plankton|Agh. Oh well if it 'aint broke don't fix it ''[jumps down]'' Keep up the good work...I guess...}}
+{{L|Plankton|Agh. Oh well, if it ain't broke, don't fix it. ''[jumps down]'' Keep up the good work...I guess...}}
 {{L|Patrick|You got it boss!}}
-{{L|Plankton|''[Opens door to the crow and Announcing]'' HEY EVERYONE! CHUM IS FUM!}}
+{{L|Plankton|''[Opens door to the crowd and announcing]'' HEY EVERYONE! CHUM IS FUM!}}
-{{L|''[Crowd Cheers. Bubble transition to outside of Chum Bucket showing a line up that goes till the outside]''}}
+{{L|''[Crowd cheers. Bubble transition to outside of Chum Bucket showing a line up that goes till the outside]''}}
 {{L|Plankton|Hey Karen, check this out!}}
 {{L|Karen|What now?}}
-{{L|Plankton|You see every time I make a sale the sound goes there, Watch! ''[Opens cash register. *CHA CHING*. sound goes to microphone outside to 3 loud speakers on top of the Chum Bucket]''}}
+{{L|Plankton|You see, every time I make a sale the sound goes there, Watch! ''[Opens cash register. *CHA CHING*. sound goes to microphone outside to 3 loud speakers on top of the Chum Bucket]''}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|''[Cries]''}}
 {{L|Karen|How is that gonna help to boost sales?}}
-{{L|Plankton|Karen babe you don't need help when you have a catchy slogan like mine.}}
+{{L|Plankton|Karen, babe, you don't need help when you have a catchy slogan like mine.}}
 {{L|Karen|Don't look now, but I think your catchy slogan days are numbered.}}
 {{L|Plankton|''[Turns around and looks at the customers]''}}
-{{L|Nat|''[Barfs on floor]'' Uhh somezin' not right}}
+{{L|Nat|''[Barfs on floor]'' Uhh...something's not right.}}
-{{L|Pilar|Yeah i know, I keep sayin' "Chum is Fum" but it ehh it's just not workin'}}
+{{L|Pilar|Yeah, I know, I keep sayin' "Chum is Fum" but it...ehh...it's just not workin'.}}
 {{L|Nat|I'm outta here. ''[Throws ChumStick on the floor and leaves]''}}
 {{L|Pilar|''[Also throws away ChumStick and leaves]''}}
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 {{L|Patrick|''[examining graph that the line ends inside the toilet]'' Hmmmm, Mhmmmm, Uh huuuh. I think I see the problem. Your potty has a shocky thing in it.}}
 {{L|Plankton|NO! That's not it you FOOL! We need a new slogan! You need to come up with another genius catchphrase like "Chum is Fum" but different.}}
-{{L|Patrick|Oh... Gotcha Hmmmmmm.}}
+{{L|Patrick|Oh... Gotcha. Hmmmmmm.}}
 {{L|Narrator|3 Days Later}}
 {{L|''[Cuts to outside of Chum Bucket with a longer line of customers. zooms in on new sign "FUM IS CHUM"]''}}
-{{L|Nat|I'm so happy that they changed that old tired slogan "Chum is Fum"}}
+{{L|Nat|I'm so happy that they changed that old tired slogan, "Chum is Fum".}}
-{{L|Pilar|Yeah that new slogan "Fum IS Chum" Is way cooler.}}
+{{L|Pilar|Yeah, that new slogan "Fum is Chum" is way cooler.}}
 {{L|Nat|Way cooler!}}
-{{L|''[Nat and Pilar pick up Chum bucket supreme and start eating and barfing into their buckets]''}}
+{{L|''[Nat and Pilar pick up Chum Bucket Supreme and start eating and barfing into their buckets]''}}
-{{L|Plankton|''[Gives bucket of chum to a customer]'' Heres your chum bucket supreme, enjoy! Patrick my boy, you really earned that promotion!}}
+{{L|Plankton|''[Gives bucket of chum to a customer]'' Here's your Chum Bucket Supreme, enjoy! Patrick my boy, you really earned that promotion!}}
 {{L|Patrick|''[Washing dishes]'' Thanks boss.}}
 {{L|Plankton|Nothing can stop me now!}}
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 {{L|Patrick|Excuse me sir. ''[hands resignation slip]'' My resignation. ''[shows picture of himself in fighter plane shooting bullets]''}}
 {{L|Plankton|But you're my whole marketing department.}}
-{{L|Patrick|I know but I'm "burned out." See. ''[Turns around to show back of head burned making a hole]''Anyway, you can send my check to my home.}}
+{{L|Patrick|I know but I'm "burned out." See? ''[Turns around to show back of head burned making a hole] ''Anyway, you can send my check to my home.}}
-{{L|Plankton|''[rips resignation]'' Check? You want money for those stupid catchphrases? Anybody can sell to my idiot customers ''[over loudspeakers]'' They're buffoons, morons, they'll buy anything I sell them. They're the dumbest of the dumb, ''[Two people throw away chum]'' the stupidest of the stupid, ''[A lady and her baby throw away Chum]'' they're dummies, dweebs and doodoo dunderheads. I can keep that rabble right where I want em'! Huh?}}
+{{L|Plankton|''[rips resignation]'' Check? You want money for those stupid catchphrases? Anybody can sell to my idiot customers ''[over loudspeakers]'' They're buffoons, morons, they'll buy anything I sell them. They're the dumbest of the dumb, ''[Two people throw away chum]'' the stupidest of the stupid, ''[A lady and her baby throw away Chum]'' they're dummies, dweebs and doodoo dunderheads. I can keep that rabble right where I want 'em! Huh?}}
-{{L|Hockey Player|What was that part about doodoo dunderheads eh'?}}
+{{L|Hockey Player|What was that part about doodoo dunderheads, eh?}}
-{{L|''[ Hockey Players beat up Plankton and kick him out of chum bucket]''}}
+{{L|''[Hockey Players beat up Plankton and kick him out of the Chum Bucket]''}}
 {{L|Hockey Player|Where do you think you're going little man?}}
-{{L|Plankton|Is it too late for sorry? ''[gets squished on tee]'' DOH!}}
+{{L|Plankton|Is it too late for sorry? ''[gets squished on tee]'' D'OH!}}
-{{L|Hockey Player|''[chuckles]'' Hey check out that new sign at the Krusty Krab. Who's hungry eh'?}}
+{{L|Hockey Player|''[chuckles]'' Hey, check out that new sign at the Krusty Krab. Who's hungry, eh?}}
 {{L|''[Hockey players cheer and run to Krusty Krab as plankton gets squished]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Well, Mr. K., we're back in business!}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|Yep. ''[shouting at Patrick]'' Keep up the good work boy'o!}}
 {{L|Patrick|You got it boss! ''[Paints "Krabby Patties are Fum" on a banner]''}}