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Hey! Another jellyfish!}

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 {{L|French Narrator|Well, well, what is this? Ah, the artist at sea. Let us watch and see the fruits of his struggle. Ah, it seems that inspiration has struck.}}
-{{L|Artist|Hmm... ah! ''[draws some strokes. he hums something. however, he throws his pencil into the sea]'' My pencil! ''[searches for it in the sea]'' What?}}
+{{L|Artist|Hmm... ah! ''[He kisses his pencil, then he draws some more strokes. He hums something. He accidentally throws his pencil into the sea. It sinks in the water until it's out of sight]'']]
-{{L|French Narrator|The artist has learned the first lesson of the sea: Always bring a spare pencil.}}
+{{L|Artist| My pencil! ''[searches for it in the sea]'' What? No, no!}}
-{{L|Artist|Nooo! ''[with loudly sound. cut to the pencil dropping into the water. cut to SpongeBob and Patrick playing "Rock, Paper, Scissors" with bubbles]''}}
+{{L|French Narrator|The artist has learned the first lesson of the sea: always bring a spare pencil.}}
+{{L|Artist|''''NOOOOOOOOOO!!'''' ''[with loudly sound. Cut to the pencil dropping into the water. Meanwhile, SpongeBob and Patrick playing "Rock, Paper, Scissors" with bubbles]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|OK. Ready, Patrick? One...}}
 {{L|Patrick|Two...}}
 {{L|Both|Three!}}
 {{L|''[SpongeBob blows a scissors bubble and Patrick blows a paper bubble]''}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Scissors beats paper, Patrick! ''[laughs]'' One...}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Scissors beats paper, Patrick! ''[they both laugh at that]'' One...}}
 {{L|Both|two...}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|three! ''[both blow paper bubbles]'' Patrick, how come you always do paper? ''[the pencil pops the two paper bubbles and drops in the sand and the two scream]''}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|It means we found a magic pencil!}}
 {{L|Patrick|Now all I need is a magic mustache and all my dreams will have come true.}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|''[laughs]'' Coming right up! ''[draws mustache on Patrick]''}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|''[laughs]'' Coming right up! ''[he draws mustache on Patrick's face]''}}
-{{L|Patrick|Life is good! ''[the mustache floats away]'' Easy come, easy go!}}
+{{L|Patrick|Life is good! ''[the mustache floats away. He shrugs]'' Easy come, easy go.}}
 {{L|Squidward|Squidward, if you had some hair, you'd be the most gorgeous creature in the sea! You've got looks... talent... all you need is a full head of... ''[the mustache goes on his head]'' hair!}}
 {{L|Patrick|My turn!}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Be careful, Patrick! Being an artist is a heavy responsibility. Each work of art is like a child and must be treated as such.}}
 {{L|Patrick|Come on! I was just gonna draw a cartoon.}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Okay! Why didn't you say so? Hey! Another jellyfish!}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Okay! Why didn't you say so?}}
-{{L|Patrick|It's Squidward, silly!}}
+{{L|"[Patrick draws a crudely-drawn picture of Squidward with a small stature and a waving fist.]''
+ Hey! Another jellyfish!}
+{{L|Patrick|It's Squidward, silly!}}}
 {{L|''[The badly drawn Squidward comes to life]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|It's kind of creepy looking when it moves.}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|''[doorbell rings]'' Oh, Squidward!}}
 {{L|Squidward|''[opens door]'' What do you want? Hello, what's this? Someone left me money for a perm. Come to Hairy! ''[SpongeBob pulls the string]'' Ow! SpongeBob! Oh, my hair! ''[it floats away]'' SpongeBob!}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Wait! I've got another idea! This'll be the ultimate prank. I'll draw me, and when Squidward answers the door... it won't be me! Aww, look at him. Ain't he a doll!? All he needs is a tie. ''[Draws a tie]'' Ready for action! ''[Laughing]''}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Wait! I've got another idea! This'll be the ultimate prank. I'll draw me, and when Squidward answers the door... it won't be me! Aww, look at him. Ain't he a doll? All he needs is a tie. ''[Draws it]'' Ready for action!}}
+{{L|''[The SpongeBob doodle shouts nonsense and he runs over to Squidward's house. SpongeBob and Patrick laugh]''}}
 {{L|Patrick|He's going to the door.}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|He's knocking on the door.}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Squidward's answering the door and...}}
-{{L|''[DoodleBob pounds Squidward's head on the ground]''}}
+{{L|''[DoodleBob picks up Squidward, holding him upside-down and pounds Squidward's head on the ground]''}}
 {{L|Squidward|Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow!}}
 {{L|Patrick|He's beating up Squidward!}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|DoodleBob, stop! ''[he throws Squidward back in his house. DoodleBob is out of control, he steals the magic pencil and then runs away with it]''}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|DoodleBoy, stop! ''[he throws Squidward back in his house. DoodleBob is out of control, he steals the magic pencil and then runs away with it]''}}
 {{L|Patrick|He's got the pencil.}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|What have I done? We've got to find him! Where could he possibly be?}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|''[concerned]"What have I done? We've got to find him!
+{{L|[Bubble transition to SpongeBob and Patrick in a field with tall bushes]"}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Where could he possibly be?}}
 {{L|Patrick|Maybe he's in that poorly drawn pineapple.}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Come on, let's go! ''[Patrick hides in a bush]''}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|Come on, Patrick. Give me a boost up!}}
 {{L|Patrick|Can't we just stay down here where it's safe?}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|No way. I created this monster and I've got to stop him. ''[a wrench falls and hits Patrick on the head]''}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|No way. I created this monster and I've got to stop him. ''[a giant wrench falls and hits Patrick on the head]''}}
 {{L|DoodleBob|Neofineyin!}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|See what I mean, Patrick?}}
-{{L|Patrick|Where's the leak, ma'am? ''[DoodleBob draws a bowling ball and rolls it. Patrick's head turns into a bowling pin in surprise]'' Yurrgh! ''[Hits Patrick and some pink bowling pins and a "strike" symbol appears. Another "strike" symbol then appears after the bowling ball falls into the hole.]''}}
+{{L|Patrick|"[dizzily]"Where's the leak, ma'am? ''[DoodleBob draws a bowling ball and rolls it. Patrick's head turns into a bowling pin in surprise]'' Yurrgh! ''[Hits Patrick and some pink bowling pins and a "strike" symbol appears. Another "strike" symbol then appears after the bowling ball falls into the hole.]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|You okay, Patrick?}}
 {{L|Patrick|Finland!}}
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 {{L|''[DoodleBob breaks through the coral rock wall where SpongeBob and Patrick are hiding behind.]''}}
 {{L|DoodleBob|''[nonsense]'' Bawahh bwah bwah wahh! ''[DoodleBob grabs SpongeBob]''}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Patrick! Patrick! Do something!}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Patrick! Patrick! DO SOMETHING!}}
 {{L|Patrick| Happy birthday!}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|''[DoodleBob throws SpongeBob.]'' Arrgh!}}
+{{L|''[DoodleBob throws SpongeBob, who screams and lands with a thud in the distance]'"}}
 {{L|Patrick|''[Gives DoodleBob a rock]'' Here's your present. ''[DoodleBob bashes it on his head]'' You're welcome.}}
 {{L|DoodleBob|''[nonsense]'' Dewaaagheaugaaagh! ''[DoodleBob was about to run for his life until SpongeBob stops him whilst holding the pencil in his face]''}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|I'm sorry, what was that?}}
 {{L|DoodleBob|''[Slowing gibberish down]'' Bee ha, bala hala ba ba! ''[DoodleBob starts to shout more gibberish while SpongeBob erases his face. DoodleBob mutters then he hits a rock]''}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Hold still, Doodle. This is for your own good. ''[begins to erase DoodleBob to oblivion]'' Take that and this and this and that and this that this that... ''[screaming]'' I am SpongeBob, destroyer of evil!}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Hold still, Doodle. This is for your own good. ''[begins to erase DoodleBob to oblivion]'' Take that and this and this and that and this that this that... ''[he screams in victory]'' I AM SPONGEBOB, DESTROYER OF EVIL!}}
-{{L|Patrick|Take it easy, it's just a drawing.}}
+{{L|Patrick|Take it easy. It's just a drawing.}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Well, that takes care of that, eh, Patrick?}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|"[calmly]"Well, that takes care of that, eh, Patrick?}}
 {{L|Patrick|Done and done.}}
-{{L|''[When SpongeBob and Patrick go home, it is soon revealed that one of DoodleBob's arms is still alive]''}}
+{{L|''[When SpongeBob and Patrick go home, it is soon revealed that one of DoodleBob's arms is still alive. It creeps out from under the rock. Cut to nighttime. SpongeBob had just returned home. He draws on the spaces of his bedroom to make it look like a fancy bedroom, complete with a canopy for his bed.]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Gee, Gary, you should have been there! It sure was exciting, but you know, I kind of miss the little doodle. He was like a son to me. But I'm sure glad things are back to normal. Well, goodnight, sweet prince.}}
 {{L|Gary|''[with a crown on]'' Meow.}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|Take a look for yourself, Patrick.}}
 {{L|Patrick|''[Gasp!]'' It's the evil doodle!}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|No, no, not evil. He was just a two-dimensional creature lost in our three-dimensional aquatic world longing for a purpose.}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|No, no, not evil. He was just a two-dimensional creature lost in our three-dimensional aquatic world longing for a purpose."[he blows from a pipe]"}}
 {{L|Patrick|So... he's a drawing?}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Exactly! See how happy he is?}}
 {{L|Patrick|''[He looks at the paper with DoodleBob on it]'' He still looks kind of creepy.}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Oh, great magic pencil, your powers are too mighty for us ocean dwellers. So I will send you back to the magic kingdom from where you came. Are you ready, Patrick?}}
+{{L|Cut to outside. SpongeBob has just drawn a diving board. The pencil's broken halves have recently been taped together.]"
-{{L|Patrick|Ready! ''[SpongeBob jumps on Patrick's belly, and the pencil is launched back to the surface]''}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|O, great magic pencil, your powers are too mighty for us ocean dwellers. So I will send you back to the magic kingdom from where you came. Are you ready, Patrick?}}
+{{L|Patrick|Ready! ''[SpongeBob drops the pencil into Patrick's mouth. SpongeBob jumps from the diving board and onto Patrick's chest, and the pencil is launched back to the surface. In the real world, the artist from earlier is curled up in a fetal position]''}}
 {{L|French Narrator|We rejoin the artist in a creative slump.}}
-{{L|Artist|''[the pencil reaches the surface and lands on him]'' Huh? What's this? ''[holds his pencil]'' My pencil! ''[he draws a line, but the pencil breaks]''}}
+{{L|Artist|''[the pencil reaches the surface and lands on him]'' Huh? What's this? ''[he jumps up and holds his pencil in joy]'' My pencil! ''[he tries to draw, but unfortunately, the pencil lead breaks]''}}
 {{L|French Narrator|''[As the artist starts to cry]'' The second most important rule for the artist at sea: Always bring a pencil sharpener.}}
-{{L|Artist|'''Nooooo!'''}}
+{{L|Artist|'''NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!'''}}