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 {{L|Patrick|Whoa, what is it? It looks really old.}}
 {{L|SpongeBob; Antis, what do think that means, Patrick?}}
-{{L|Patrick|Antis, Antis...SquarePantis! Probably belonged to your ancient ancestors. ''[Picks up the half of the amulet]'' SpongeBob SquarePantis, you must wear the ancient crest of your ancestors for it is your birth right! ''[shoves it into SpongeBob's face]''}}
+{{L|Patrick|Antis, Antis...SquarePantis! Probably belonged to your ancient ancestors. ''[Picks up the half of the amulet]'' SpongeBob SquarePantis, you must wear the ancient crest of your ancestors for it is your birthright! ''[shoves it into SpongeBob's face]''}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|''[Falling]'' My birth right?! Ow ooh, Ow ooh ow! Let's take this to the Bikini Bottom museum, they'll know what it is!}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|''[Falling]'' My birthright?! Ow, ooh, ow, ooh, ow! Let's take this to the Bikini Bottom museum, they'll know what it is!}}
 {{L|''[cut to museum]''}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|''[Whistles]'' Oo...uh...beautiful day for standing outside a museum doin' nothin'.}}
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 {{L|Squidward|You're going to steal it!?}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|No. Squidward, we'd never...}}
-{{L|Squidward|This is a new low, even for YOU TWO. Lucky for you, I was here today. Stealing artifacts could land you in the stony loneso... ''[Sees the amulet's half was still there and Squidward was dumb founded]'' ahh! ahh! ahh! ome! You boobs found the missing half to the Atlantean amulet?}}
+{{L|Squidward|This is a new low, even for YOU TWO. Lucky for you, I was here today. Stealing artifacts could land you in the stony loneso... ''[Sees the amulet's half was still there and is dumbfounded]''...ooooome?! You boobs found the missing half to the Atlantean amulet?}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Uh, whats an Atlantean omelet?}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|What's an Atlantean omelet?}}
-{{L|Squidward|Amulet, bot omelet! It's the key to untold riches!}}
+{{L|Squidward|Amulet,  ot omelet! It's the key to untold riches!}}
 {{L|''[Mr. Krabs shoves SpongeBob and Patrick over violently and faces Squidward]''}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|Did somebody say untold riches!?}}
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 {{L|Mr. Krabs|Diamond light bulbs! I wonder what they make the money out of.}}
 {{L|Squidward|For reasons unknown, this great city disappeared one day, but no ruins were ever found. All the inventions that you take for granted, were given to us by the Atlanteans. Their advances in art, financial wealth and weaponry were eons ahead of their time!}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Why is this bubble painted on the murel?}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Why is this bubble painted on the mural?}}
-{{L|Squidward|That's just the oldest living bubble}}
+{{L|Squidward|That's just the oldest living bubble.}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|The oldest living bubble, alive! ''[shoves Patrick in front of it]'' Behold Patrick-the oldest living bubble!}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|The oldest living bubble, alive! ''[shoves Patrick in front of it]'' Behold, Patrick-the oldest living bubble!}}
 {{L|Patrick|This is the most beautiful bubble I've ever seen.}}
-{{L|Squidward|That's just a painting you quarter-wit! ''[to Krabs]'' Quarter-wit. Ha, it's less than half. The real bubble lives in Atlantis, some darn old bubble hales in comparison to the art...}}
+{{L|Squidward|That's just a painting, you quarter-wit! ''[to Krabs]'' Quarter-wit. Ha, it's less than half. The real bubble lives in Atlantis, some dumb old bubble pales in comparison to the arts...}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|Money!}}
-{{L|Sandy|''[comes onto the screen from out of nowhere]'' And science, don't forget science. Whats all the hubba boys?}}
+{{L|Sandy|''[comes onto the screen from out of nowhere]'' And science, don't forget science. What's all the hubbub, boys?}}
-{{L|Squidward|These two chowder brains found the missing half to the amulet of Atlantis.}}
+{{L|Squidward|These two chowderbrains found the missing half to the amulet of Atlantis.}}
 {{L|Sandy|The Amulet of Atlantis?! Legend says, that when the two halves are joined, the path to Atlantis is opened! What are y'all waitin' for? Let's hitch them two dogies up! Go on Squidward!}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|Hurry up Squidward, that money ain't gettin' any younger. ''[Squidward connects the two halves and a bright light activates. Squidward is happy. Sandy is in disbelief. SpongeBob and Patrick exclaim excitedly.]''}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|Hoo hoo yeah, hoo hoo hoo!}}
 {{L|''[A van drops from the ceiling]''}}
-{{L|Squidward|The magical path to Atlantis is a Van?}}
+{{L|Squidward|The magical path to Atlantis is a van?}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|Nice hot rod flames!}}
 {{L|Patrick|''[Coin spins and attaches itself to the van]'' What's it doing? ''[The door to the van opens. We fade to black, then to the van opening again. Sandy looks inside]''}}
-{{L|Sandy|Well, holly-wally ding-dang-doo. Would ya' look at that!? Take a gander, y'all!}}
+{{L|Sandy|Well, holly-wally ding-dang-doo. Would ya look at that!? Take a gander, y'all!}}
 {{L|Squidward|Fabulous decor!}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|Quite a vessel, but who's manning it?}}
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 {{L|Robot|We Atlanteans find the use of fossil fuels to be counter-intuitive, and have developed an alternative source we call song.}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|Huh?}}
-{{L|Robot|The engine of this vessel is fueled by song, the more you sing of you desires, the closer to Atlantis you will get. Let us commence singing.}}
+{{L|Robot|The engine of this vessel is fueled by song. The more you sing of your desires, the closer to Atlantis you will get. Let us commence singing.}}
 {{L|Squidward|Does that make any sense?}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|No, but I'm game for singing any day! ♪Sing? Sing a song? A song of wanting to move along!♪ ''[The van rises up and floats in mid-air. SpongeBob sings off-key]'' ♪To a land where all our dre-e.♪ ''[The van rises up and floats in mid-air. SpongeBob sings off-key]''  Whoops, sorry. ♪To a land where all our dreeeeeams, can finally come true.♪ ''[The van rises up high. It makes a hole in the roof]'' ♪A bubble I long for, that so eludes me, but soon enough I will seeeeeeeeeeeeeee...♪}}
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 {{L|Sandy|♪Did you all hear something? I can hardly believe that there's a lost city where having smarts is more important-than being pretty!♪ ''[Sandy makes a clone of herself]'' ♪With all their advanced science, and my painfully large mind!♪}}
 {{L|Sandy Clone|♪I bet we can figure out how to make wondrous things, like melons with edible rinds!♪ ''[they dig in on watermelon. Juice gets on the screen and transitions to Squidward playing piano]''}}
-{{L|Squidward|♪As a connoisseur of fine art, I'm proud to say! I've always seen things in my own special way! 'Art'-lantis with their glorious aesthetics, I'll cop their style in a while- my art will be prophetic!♪}}
+{{L|Squidward|♪As a connoisseur of fine art, I'm proud to say! I've always seen things in my own special way! 'Art'-lantis, with their glorious aesthetics, I'll copy their style in a while- my art will be prophetic!♪}}
 {{L|Patrick|♪I'm Patrick, I'm Patrick, Patrick-Patrick-Patrick! And I like um, uuuuh,♪ ''[record scratches]'' I don't know what I like.}}
 {{L|Robot|Warning, you have run out of song fuel.}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|Pretty!}}
 {{L|All|''[They continue to scream and the bus smashes through a city wall of Atlantis. We see that it has futuristic blue and purple buildings with spires and bubbles. The bus suddenly skids to a stop, unearthing some trees in the process. The five emerge from the bus.]''}}
-{{L|Squidward|You villains haven't even been here two minutes and you've already messed up someone's topiary garden.}}
+{{L|Squidward|You buffoons haven't even been here two minutes and you've already messed up someone's topiary garden.}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|Go on, SpongeBob. Ring the bell.}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Ring for the king, huh? ''[rings the bell. A red carpet comes down the stairs and Lord Royal Highness comes out]''}}
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 {{L|Mr. Krabs|I'm Eugene. I like money.}}
 {{L|LRH|Yes, I can see that. Pleasure to meet you. Come, I'll give you the grand tour of our Atlantean fortress. I'm so glad you're all here.}}
-{{L|Plankton|They're gone. Now to get to those weapons... ''[tries to open the glovebox door, but fails]'' Trapped! Ok, what do I have to work with here? What's this? Owners manual!? Looks like I found my escape route! ''[Laughs diabolically]'' Owe!}}
+{{L|Plankton|They're gone. Now to get to those weapons... ''[tries to open the glovebox door, but fails]'' Trapped! Ok, what do I have to work with here? What's this? Owners manual!? Looks like I found my escape route! ''[Laughs diabolically]'' Ow!}}
 {{L|LRH|For centuries, we Atlanteans spent, nay, wasted our talents and energy building the most sophisticated weaponry to defend ourselves from invaders. But we abandoned the idea of warfare long ago and now all these weapons gather dust behind this locked door as an example of what must be done if one wishes to live in harmony with all creatures of this, or any, world.}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|''[sighs]'' Eh, harmony shmarmony. When do we get to see the treasure?!}}
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 {{L|Mr. Krabs|Comin' through, boys!}}
 {{L|Plankton|These Atlanteans leave a room full of the most advanced weaponry unguarded? No wonder they got lost. ''[Squeezes under door]'' Oh, my! There will be no one to stop me this time! ''[Laughs diabolically. Patchy reappears]''}}
-{{L|Patchy|Well, bad news, kids. Encino's still lost. ''[The radio starts playing]'' Oh! But, at least I got me radio fixed! ''[Patchy snaps his fingers while listening to it, then, it explodes]'' Well, enjoy the rest of the show. ''[cuts back to Atlantis and then cuts to LRH giving the tour]''}}
+{{L|Patchy|Well, bad news, kids. Encino's still lost. ''[The radio starts playing]'' Oh! But, at least I got me radio fixed! ''[Patchy snaps his fingers while listening to it, then it explodes]'' Well, enjoy the rest of the show. ''[cuts back to Atlantis and then cuts to LRH giving the tour]''}}
 {{L|LRH|It is both an honor and a pleasure to welcome you to Atlantis. We haven't had visitors in some time. You see, being in a lost city has certain disadvantages which I digress. Now if you follow me, I'll show you some of our grandest achievements...}}
-{{L|Mr. Krabs|Squidward! You told me the streets were paved with gold. Now that street light better be a 600 dollar diamond or else. ''[Mr. Krabs gets on Squidward's neck and starts unscrewing a lightbulb]'' Ah hold still, Squidward.}}
+{{L|Mr. Krabs|Squidward! You told me the streets were paved with gold. Now that street light better be a 600 karat diamond or else. ''[Mr. Krabs gets on Squidward's neck and starts unscrewing a lightbulb]'' Ah hold still, Squidward.}}
 {{L|Squidward|You're standing on my neck!}}
 {{L|''[They trip and the light bulb smashes]''}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|Mr. Krabs?}}
 {{L|''[Mr. Krabs sniffs]''}}
-{{L|Mr. Krabs|I'd know that smell anywhere. Me pockets. They'd be smelling loot.}}
+{{L|Mr. Krabs|I'd know that smell anywhere. Me pockets! They be smelling loot!}}
 {{L|''[His pockets drag him into the hall of Treasure]''}}
-{{L|LRH|Those pockets of yours certainly has a thing for treasure.}}
+{{L|LRH|Those pockets of yours certainly have a nose for treasure.}}
-{{L|Mr. Krabs|These are me hounds to me pants.}}
+{{L|Mr. Krabs|These are me houndstooth pants.}}
 {{L|LRH|What you see here is a glimpse of ancient Atlantean history. Long ago we abandoned our obssesion with wealth to focus on the pursuit of knowledge. So help yourselves to as much as you pockets can carry!}}
 {{L|Mr. Krabs|As much as me pockets can carry?! ♪Oh, if I'd only known when I woke up today, I'd have stopped at me tailors along the way, and had ten more pockets put on me pants, 'cause I think I hear a money avalanche!♪ ''[yodels]'' ♪Look at all this cash, hey, look at all this money! I hope me heart can take it!♪ ''[goes unconscious]''}}
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 {{L|LRH|Very well then. Off we go.}}
 {{L|Patrick|SpongeBob, when are we gonna see the bubble?}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Patrick, ssh!}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Patrick, shhh!}}
 {{L|LRH|Don't dally, lads. You don't wanna be left behind do you?}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|No, sir.}}
 {{L|Sandy|You know, LRH, I was born with a scientific curiosity and I was wonderin' if I could have a look at some of your scientific achievements?}}
-{{L|LRH|Of course, Miss Cheeks, here we are, the combination of all our technology. I give you the Alantean hall of Science.}}
+{{L|LRH|Of course, Miss Cheeks, here we are, the combination of all our technology. I give you the Atlantean Hall of Science.}}
 {{L|''[Opens a large door]''}}
 {{L|Sandy|Hoppin' acorns. Look at all this high tech gear! ''[Looks at an invention]'' What does this gizmo do?}}
-{{L|LRH|It's a biomass converting device. It can take any household object, this comb for example and turn it into say, ice cream. Would anyone like to try?}}
+{{L|LRH|It's a biomass converting device. It can take any household object--this comb, for example--and turn it into say, ice cream. Would anyone like to try?}}
 {{L|Both|Oh me, me, me, me, meee, mee!!}}
 {{L|LRH|Go ahead!}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|Someone help me!}}
 {{L|LRH|And finally passes through this tube into this tank which contains every living element known to... ''[peers closer]'' Oh, dear heavens! It looks like our scientists were working on a very aggressive case of the sniffles! He could be in trouble.}}
-{{L|Patrick|Don't worry, SpongeBob. I'm coming to help you!}}
+{{L|Patrick|Don't worry, SpongeBob. I'm coming to rescue you!}}
 {{L|''[Patrick disappears]''}}
-{{L|Squidward|Okay, I've seen enough. Let me out of this thing! ''[Squidward disappears and reappears into a game boy game graphic scene]'' What's going on here? I... Oh no. ''[screams]''}}
+{{L|Squidward|Okay, I've seen enough. Let me out of this thing! ''[Squidward disappears and reappears into an 8-bit scene]'' What's going on here? I... Oh no. ''[screams]''}}
 {{L|''[Squidward sees a giant nose]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Squidward, don't make any sudden movements!}}
 {{L|''[The nose sneezes germs and Squidward falls over, jumps quickly and runs]''}}
 {{L|Squidward|Help! ''[Screams]''}}
-{{L|''[SpongeBob and Patrick follows while they're being chased by germs, and Sandy enters the game]''}}
+{{L|''[SpongeBob and Patrick follow while they're being chased by germs, and Sandy enters the game]''}}
 {{L|All|Help, Sandy!}}
-{{L|Sandy|Sounds like them critters is in trouble! ''[The nose catches SpongeBob, Patrick and Squidward, and the germs block Sandy from getting to them]'' Hold on, fellas! I'll be there soon, as soon as I send these critters to their doom! ''[A title screen shows like a Nintendo game]'' ♪Look out, germs. The end is here, Your days are numbered, 'cause Sandy's here! I'll get these germs, and make 'em pay, with some good old fashioned ka-rah-tey.♪ Hi-yah! ♪If I borrow some elements from the periodic table I can mix up a brew that is sure to disable any virus, bug, or sniffle that steps into my path. And make them feel my mi-cro-sco-pic wrath!♪ Hi-yah! ''[she hits the nose with a submarine and defeats it, the rest of the gang gets saved, they all cheer, then the game says: "Game Over". Everyone is out of the machine]''}}
+{{L|Sandy|Sounds like them critters is in trouble! ''[The nose catches SpongeBob, Patrick and Squidward, and the germs block Sandy from getting to them]'' Hold on, fellas! I'll be there soon, as soon as I send these critters to their doom! ''[A title screen shows like a Nintendo game]'' ♪Look out, germs. The end is here, Your days are numbered, 'cause Sandy's here! I'll get these germs, and make 'em pay, with some good old fashioned ka-rah-tay.♪ Hi-yah! ♪If I borrow some elements from the periodic table I can mix up a brew that is sure to disable any virus, bug, or sniffle that steps into my path. And make them feel my mi-cro-sco-pic wrath!♪ Hi-yah! ''[she hits the nose with a submarine and defeats it, the rest of the gang gets saved, they all cheer, then the game says: "Game Over". Everyone is out of the machine]''}}
 {{L|LRH|Well, shall we continue on with the rest of the tour?}}
 {{L|Sandy|Y'all head out without me.}}
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 {{L|Squidward|Somehow I knew I'd get stuck with you yahoo's the longest.}}
 {{L|''[The camera zooms in to the heater vent where Plankton is hiding, Plankton chuckles]''}}
-{{L|Plankon|♪Oh, what a beautiful sight! Weapons as far as the eye can see. But which one will be right for me? How do I pick? Which one will do the trick? Which is best to guarantee eternal rest? So many weapons! How do I choose? Look at this one with a beautiful fuse! And with this one I couldn't lose. That one will surely give them the blues... And this one here matches my shoes!♪ ''[serious tone]'' ♪Come on, Plankton, just pick one and forget about your shoes!♪ Eeny, meeny, minie moe, I pick you, now let's go! ''[jumps into a giant tank's gun. Scene cuts to LRH giving the tour]''}}
+{{L|Plankon|♪Oh, what a beautiful sight! Weapons as far as the eye can see. But which one will be right for me? How do I pick? Which one will do the trick? Which is best to guarantee eternal rest? So many weapons! How do I choose? Look at this one with a beautiful fuse! And with this one I couldn't lose. That one will surely give them the blues... And this one here matches my shoes!♪ ''[serious tone]'' Come on, Plankton, just pick one and forget about your shoes! Eeny, meeny, minie moe, I pick you, now let's go! ''[jumps into a giant tank's gun. Scene cuts to LRH giving the tour]''}}
 {{L|Squidward|This stuff is wonderful and all but when are we going to see some real Atlantean culture?}}
 {{L|LRH|Gentlemen? What is art?}}
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 {{L|''[Throws Squidward into the painting]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Whoa!}}
-{{L|Squidward|This place is amazing! ''[steps into other paintings]'' ♪Isn't this great, isn't this neat, I'm a living work of art from my head to my feet! From the very first drawings on walls in caves, art has been what the heart and soul craves! So pick up a brush, a pencil or pen. If you don't like this one, paint it again! From now on please call me Sir Real. I can wait for your impression to congeal. Take it from an undersea renaissance man. I'd even look great on the side of your van! Any way you carve it, I am art and art is me. Ask your mama or your dada to tell you about the uh, schism. Between minimalism and cubism. My personality may be of the cynical type. But I've finally found something that lives up to the hype. I can say honestly and with great certainty, that Atlantis is where I want to spend, eternity♪ ''[holds note. Scene cuts when Squidward's out of the painting]''}}
+{{L|Squidward|This place is amazing! ''[steps into other paintings]'' ♪Isn't this great, isn't this neat, I'm a living work of art from my head to my feet! From the very first drawings on walls in caves, art has been what the heart and soul craves! So pick up a brush, a pencil or pen. If you don't like this one, paint it again! From now on please call me Sir Real. I can wait for your impression to congeal. Take it from an undersea renaissance man. I'd even look great on the side of your van! Any way you carve it, I am art and art is me. Ask your mama or your dada to tell you about the uh, schism. Between minimalism and cubism. My personality may be of the cynical type. But I've finally found something that lives up to the hype. I can say honestly and with great certainty, that Atlantis is where I want to spend eternity!♪ ''[holds note. Scene cuts when Squidward's out of the painting]''}}
 {{L|Atlantean|Hey can you not sing? I'm trying to model here!}}
 {{L|Atlantean Painter|Now hold on Nando. Why don't you take five. I'm really diggin' this squid's form.}}
 {{L|''[The other Atlantean sighs and walks away]''}}
-{{L|Squidward|Look's like I'll be here inspiring these Atlantean art makers with my beauty. You guys go on ahead!}}
+{{L|Squidward|Looks like I'll be here inspiring these Atlantean art makers with my beauty. You guys go on ahead!}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Okay. Bye Squidward!}}
 {{L|''[They leave and Squidward poses]''}}
-{{L|LRH|Now this section of town is known for it's advances in the science of fondue cooking.}}
+{{L|LRH|Now this section of town is known for its advances in the science of fondue cooking.}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Excuse me, sir this tour has been great and all but uh, can we see the bubble now?}}
 {{L|LRH|Do excuse me. Most folks don't stay with the tour this long. Of course you can. First, remember this. This bubble is over one million years old. It was brought here when the first Atlanteans colonized this place. Deftly hand carried over billions of light years from our home planet. It is our people's most beloved and treasured ancient relic. But most importantly remember to have fun!}}
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 {{L|Both|The World's Oldest Living Bubble!}}
 {{L|''[They land on the safe keeping tube]''}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Look at it Patrick! So ancient, so floaty. It is the most beautiful bubble wrinkled up, dusty old bubble I've ever seen!}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Look at it Patrick! So ancient, so floaty. It is the most beautiful, wrinkled up, dusty old bubble I've ever seen!}}
 {{L|Patrick|Like a delicate air raisin!}}
 {{L|''[They slide off the glass]''}}
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 {{L|''[They managed to get the glass back after a close call when the bubble land on the glass on SpongeBob's side and bounces off without any harm, they laugh in victory]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Whoo, that was a close one buddy!}}
-{{L|Patrick|Yeah! We almost popped the most prized possession of all Atlanteans! ''[laughs]''}}
+{{L|Patrick|Yeah! We almost popped the most prized possession of all Atlantis-eans! ''[laughs]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Boy, that would have been out greatest blunder without a doubt! But we should go before something bad does happen.}}
-{{L|Patrick|Ooh! Let's get a picture for our scrapbooks before leave.}}
+{{L|Patrick|Ooh! Let's get a picture for our scrapbooks before we leave.}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Great idea Patrick!}}
 {{L|Both|Cheese!}}
-{{L|''[Patrick camera flashes, and the bubble pops]''}}
+{{L|''[Patrick's camera flashes, and the bubble pops]''}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|''[teeth closed]'' Patrick did you hear something?}}
-{{L|Patrick|''[teeth closed]'' I thought I heard a popping sound?}}
+{{L|Patrick|''[teeth closed]'' A sort of a popping sound?}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|Mmm-Hmm.}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|Mmm-hmm.}}
-{{L|''[They look at each other screaming and their skin peels off, SpongeBob's eyes fall in his mouth, Scene cuts to the gang having dinner]''}}
+{{L|''[They look at each other screaming and their skin peels off, and SpongeBob's eyes fall in his mouth. Scene cuts to the gang having dinner]''}}
 {{L|LRH|So sorry I'm late. The tour ran a little long. So, how are you all enjoying our beloved city?}}
 {{L|Squidward|I'm never leaving this place. I've learned more about painting in a few hours here than I did in four years of community college.}}
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 {{L|Squidward|Why would you want to leave a paradise like Atlantis?}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|Because, uh, Gary misses me?}}
-{{L|''[Scene cuts to SpongeBob's house when Gary is having a party with other snails]''}}
+{{L|''[Scene cuts to SpongeBob's house where Gary is having a party with other snails]''}}
 {{L|Patrick|We destroyed your most prized possession! ''[Covers mouth]''}}
 {{L|LRH|''[pauses]'' Ahahaha! If there's one thing we Atlanteans enjoy, it's a healthy dose of dark humor!}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|It's not a joke, we burst the bubble!}}
 {{L|''[Sandy and Squidward gasped]''}}
-{{L|LRH|Haha. That's not the real bubble. It's just a prop for the tourists. This is the real deal}}
+{{L|LRH|Haha. That's not the real bubble. It's just a prop for the tourists. This is the real deal.}}
 {{L|''[Holds up the real bubble in a bottle]''}}
 {{L|Both|Ooh!}}
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 {{L|''[The guards follow the gang outside the building but they all see Plankton's giant tank, Plankton aims at them while laughing diabolically. Patchy reappears]''}}
 {{L|Patchy|''[realizes that there is no water left]'' This is the end of patchy. No water, no food, and still no Encino. And here come the vultures the pick me bones! ''[Potty flies up]'' Shiver me timbers! It's potty! I wonder what parrot tastes like... Come back here! Uh-oh. Here come the hallucinations.}}
-{{L|SpongeBob|''[laughs]'' Patchy, it's me. SpongeBob SquarePants. ''[Patchy is excited, and then he cries]'' Don't lose hope. Everything will be all right when you get into Encino.}}
+{{L|SpongeBob|''[laughs]'' Patchy, it's me. SpongeBob SquarePants. ''[Patchy is excited, and then he cries]'' Don't lose hope. Everything will be all right when you get to Encino.}}
 {{L|Patchy|But, Encino is gone.}}
 {{L|SpongeBob|It's not gone, if you believe.}}
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 {{L|Baby|Ohh! Ohh!}}
 {{L|♪You got to believe. I'm back in Encino. You got to believe. Everything's all right. You got to believe. I'm back in Encino. You got to...♪}}
-{{L|Patchy|''[drops his ice-cream scoop and strange sounds appear. Potty brawks, and then, pokes Patchy]'' Ow! Ow! It was all a hallucination. Encino's still gone! ''[Patchy cries]'' Oooooo, a sandwich. Potty, you're a lifesaver. ''[opens a sandwich]'' Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Oh, potty, you know I don't like mayo! ''[sees a vulture]'' Here you want some? Go on. Take it. You know, I don't like the mayonnaise, you know. You know, when it gets above 130, 135, it gets kind of grody, you know.}}
+{{L|Patchy|''[drops his ice-cream scoop and we hear strange sounds. Potty squawks, and then pokes Patchy]'' Ow! Ow! It was all a hallucination. Encino's still gone! ''[Patchy cries]'' Oooooo, a sandwich. Potty, you're a lifesaver. ''[opens a sandwich]'' Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Oh, Potty, you know I don't like mayo! ''[sees a vulture]'' Here you want some? Go on. Take it. You know, I don't like the mayonnaise, you know. You know, when it gets above 130, 135, it gets kind of grody, you know.}}
 {{L|''[cuts to the gang standing in front of the tank]''}}
 {{L|Plankton|''[laughs diabolically]'' Cower to me fools! I have commandeered the most powerful weapon in the Atlantean arsenal! Now bow before the new king of Atlantis and prepare to taste my wrath! ''[He stomps on the switch, and the switch didn't budge]'' Yeah! Huh? Uh, uh I mean, uh, prepare to taste my wrath! ''[He stomps on the switch rapidly harder, but it still didn't budge]'' Oh, you! ''[Grabs a rock while struggling]'' Prepare to taste my wrath! ''[Throws the rock on the switch, and the switch budged]''}}
-{{L|Computer|Launch sequence employed! ''[The tank shakes and Plankton laughs diabolically, everyone gasped and they held each other. The tank shoots out ice cream and a cow's moo is heard, SpongeBob and Patrick starts eating the ice cream]''}}
+{{L|Computer|Launch sequence deployed! ''[The tank shakes and Plankton laughs diabolically, everyone gasps and they hold onto each other. The tank shoots out ice cream and a cow's moo is heard, and SpongeBob and Patrick starts eating the ice cream]''}}
 {{L|Patrick|Plankton's wrath tastes like ice cream.}}
 {{L|Both|Thanks Plankton!}}
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 {{L|SpongeBob|♪Bikini Bottom is the greatest place to be! I can--♪}}
 {{L|All|♪Good-bye Atlantis!♪ ''[Patchy reappears]''}}
-{{L|Patchy|Well, pretty good story, Eh, kids? ''[Steps on something, which happens to be Encino]'' I found Encino. ''[Realized it's been shrunken]'' But, it's all tiny. Somebody must have... ''[Sees a big blue beam while screaming, aliens appears]''}}
+{{L|Patchy|Well, pretty good story, eh, kids? ''[Steps on something, which happens to be Encino]'' I found Encino. ''[Realized it's been shrunken]'' But, it's all tiny. Somebody must have... ''[Sees a big blue beam while screaming, and three aliens appear]''}}
-{{L|Norbluckfive's mother|Sorry, sir. But, our son Norbluckfive was messing with his shrink-a-tron again.}}
+{{L|Norbluckfive's mother|Sorry, sir. Our son Norbluckfive was messing with his shrink-a-tron again.}}
 {{L|Patchy|No, no, no, no! I want Encino full size again! There's no place like home. There's no place like home.}}
-{{L|Norbluckfive's mother|Ok, hand it over, Nobluckfive.''[Norbluckfive pulls out a remote and gives it to his mother]'' We'll fix your town, Beardy.}}
+{{L|Norbluckfive's mother|Ok, hand it over, Norbluckfive.''[Norbluckfive pulls out a remote and gives it to his mother]'' We'll fix your town, Beardy.}}
 {{L|Patchy|Beardy?''[Then, Norbluckfive's mother pushes the button, causing a huge tornado to be created with Patchy in it screaming. Cuts to Patchy's house]'' Well, Look's like everything's back to the right size, eh, Potty? ''[Wonders where Potty is]'' Potty?}}
 {{L|Potty|Burrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! ''[Stomps on Patchy]''}}
-{{L|Patchy|Ow! Well, kids, I'm a little busy right now, but, be sure to come back real soon for more of your old pal Patchy. Ow! And some more SpongeBob SquarePants. Potty, will you get off of me! ''[SpongeBob laughs]''}}
+{{L|Patchy|Ow! Well, kids, I'm a little busy right now, but, be sure to come back real soon for more of your old pal Patchy. Ow! And more SpongeBob SquarePants. Potty, will you get off of me! ''[SpongeBob laughs]''}}