User:AW10/transcripts/Jellyfishing (transcript)/errors

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1. Line 1,
   1. "crowd" is a term that describes only humans.
   2. When describing the house of SpongeBob, the house of Patrick, and the house of Squidward, you do not have to do 's for all of the names, just the last one because you say "houses".
2. Lines 1, 3, 10, 11, 13, 34, 42, 48, 62, 69, 80, 81, 85, 97, 99, 103, 105, 108, 110, 113, 135, and 148, do not use "camera".
3. Lines 1 and 103, "Jellyfish" is the plural of "jellyfish".
4. Lines 2, 4, and 6, his name is French Narrator.
5. Lines 7, 89, and 97, only use "s" at the end on a verb for a singular noun.
6. Line 10, "stinged" is not a word, but "stung" is.
7. Line 30, it's "mouth", not "month".
8. Line 42, it's "picture", not "picure".
9. Line 49,
   1. It's "He and Patrick", not "Him and Patrick".
   2. "Hung" is used for past-tense. "Hang" is used for present-tense.
10. Line 54, it's "SpongeBob", not "SponegeBob".
11. Line 116, you forgot the "i" in Squidward.
12. Line 129, the actual name for "plasters" is "adhesive bandages".